Have you ever wondered how police robots can be helpful when people are being held hostage. Tracy vandermarkÉ Armed robots can enter hostage situations where an officer could not. From a safe distance the officer can see how many hostages are involved, what locations they are in as well as their physical condition. when people are where they and when the police come they are being held hostage. Think this is a good paragraph because people are being held hostage
What it Is or Does
Have you ever wondered why we need police robots. According to Tracy Vandermark, we need police robots for bomb threats. We don't want police or other people getting killed. In one wrong move you can die. If you clip the wrong wire, you will instantly die. I think this is a good paragraph because police robots are getting killed, but the people are helping with the police robots.
Have you ever wondered about bomb threats? According to traci vandermark One area that presents real and immediate danger to police officers is a bomb threat. One wrong move can mean certain death, not only for the officer but for those in the nearby vicinity. Robots stand in for an officer in locating and defusing a bomb. To do this a robot is equipped with cameras and microphones. This allows police to monitor the scene and look for the bomb from a distance. Some robots are able to go further from the officers but stay within remote distance because they are powered by a battery similar to a car battery. Other robots are tethered to the intelligence devices by use of connecting cables.
How it Works
This paragraph is about how you use them and how do they work. According to Traci Vandermark, they use remote control with a battery inside (like a car battery). They have cameras and microphones to hear and see where they're going if there's a robber or bomb. I think this is good because you need to know how to use them.
This paragraph is about É According to Traci vandermarkÉThat when people are there and when the police come they are being held hostage. Think this is a good paragraph because people are being held hostage
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